The other thing I noticed is how the words flow together - which brings us to how the words in books are put together, particularly in descriptions or the use of similes. Some authors tend toward images that sew seamlessly into the story. Others jackhammer images into your brain with huge earphones, pounding head splitting, abrasive music blow by blow until you lose the line of the story trying to sort out the image (if you see what I mean) and it can ruin a good story.

The Angry Woman Suite
- ISBN-13: 9781937698539
- Publisher: Lee Fullbright, an imprint of Telemachus Press
- Publication date: 3/13/2012
- Pages: 382
About the Book:
Francis Grayson spent his childhood in a rundown mansion near a small town in Pennsylvania, living with his mother, grandmother, two aunts and older brother. From the beginning of his life, he was a marked child, a reminder of sin and loss, making him the target of the women in his household. He grows up with a bitterness tempered by his desire to fix whatever is wrong with these women. This bitterness and desire clings to him even as he marries and works to raise two girls.